She’s been with him
For as long as she can remember
He’s been her pillar
He’s been her wall
He’s been her strength
He’s been her weakness
He’s been her love
He’s been her life
N he’s been unkind to her
Unkind
To have left her
Unkind
To have never returned
Unkind
To have gone so far away from her
Tears welled up in her eyes
She hadn’t known of life without him
Happiness or sorrow...it was him
Hope or despair....it was him
Laughter or tears..it was him
It always had been him
N now he was gone
Gone forever.....
Her tears had now dried
Refusing to leave her alone
She begged them to go
They ignored
She pleaded
they refused
She questioned
they finally relented
n answered
“he’s sent us...to be with u”
Thursday, May 3, 2007
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Hmmmmmmm ...wel Garu as far as d poem is concerned itz bfully penned down bt thinkng abt d force which drove u 2 write this im aint guesng wt hpnd lady al ok ya mood kia n 4 a chnge u wrote a sad 1...otherwise quite touchy melanchonic poem...nice 1 though!
hey i told u its beautifulll
i am so a fan of the last line
"he's sent us .... to be with u"
oh i just totally love it.....great work garu :-*
loads of luv
vands
@mads
thank u sweety!
nothing drove me to write this..its imaginary..mujhe kya hona hai..im mast!
luv u
@ vands
ive written it only for the last line!!! the line tht was playing in my head n i just had to do sumthing abt it so had to write the rest of it as well!!:P
luv ya
OH.......THN 2 NO WORDS 2 SAY..KYA MAST THA TERI TARAH BILKUL ...MERA NAY POST PADH LE..:P
awesome awesome awesome.."Taaliz"
loved it...waiting for more :)
Oh waise abt ur comment on my blog..it was a permissive blog pehle..not anymore! so keep visiting hehe
@ neers
thankooo for the permission!!! i will keep visiting!:P
very thought provoking!!
thanks sam!
update update update!!!
2 good garima!!
im stil recovering from the last line!lol!damn good!
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